One demolished life
Agony and turmoil
Impressions on a broken heart
He lives there
In the shattered remnants
There was a boy I once knew
He made the world come hurtling down
He made it crash and burn
He made my heart sink
Further and further
One soul crushed
Ache and strife
He had no desire for tomorrow
But he knew
If he wasn’t cutting
He would feel the pain forever
There was a bright future ahead of him
But he was blind to it
The pain had already engulfed him
Living hurt too much
Grab the dagger
Wash away reality
Blood gushing
Pain numbing
Gasping pants
Toes curling
Pulse dropping
He’s losing consciousness
He knew this would happen
The floor floods with thick red poison
He gasps faintly
His skin pales
His eyes fade
One demolished life
Agony and turmoil
Impressions on a broken heart
He lives there
In the shattered remnants
This poem was something I originally wrote for English class based on a scuicide of my friend. Just wondering if it's any good?
